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This is probably pretty bad because it's my first try at making a story, but I just felt like it. Critique is welcome to help me improve, but I don't have premium, so just do it in the comments.
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Well, this is certainly a nice "try", as you say! I quite enjoyed it! Not a lot of mistakes to be found, either. Then again, I'm no Grammar Teacher........